Talk:Amir Ahmad Nasr

This article was nominated for deletion on 7 May 2017. The result of the discussion was keep.

Amir Ahmad Nasr was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (September 11, 2017). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vanamonde93 (talk · contribs) 09:46, 11 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article. Vanamonde (talk) 09:46, 11 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Nasr is clearly an important figure, but the article at present does not do its subject justice. It is 532 words long, of which a substantial chunk are quotes from the subject. Much of the coverage is to do with his book and his blog: besides that, the biographical information is limited pretty much to a single paragraph. Likewise, most of the sources are related to his books and his blog, or are primary sources from organizations he is connected with: the only detailed biographical source seems to be the WSJ article, and it's difficult to construct a GA article from a single news profile. Even so I was able to find information in the sources currently in the article, which is not included: such as the fact that he applied for and received asylum in Canada. This really needs more detail to meet GA criterion 3 (broad in coverage) and as the article is currently very far from meeting this, I regret to say I have to fail this review. Vanamonde (talk) 10:30, 11 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your feedback! I understand your reasoning for declining the nomination, and I appreciate constructive criticism. Cheers! Comatmebro (talk) 21:32, 12 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]