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Peer Review by Julia

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Reread just to make sure you can clean up the small spelling and grammar errors. Elaborate more on what she did after she constructed a statement after the president's resignation. It seemed like in this particular section (Government Work) the former president of the Maldives was spoken about more than Aminath. I really liked your leading sentences for each section. None of them seemed misleading and really set off the different paragraphs well. I liked the link you had to Mohamed Nasheed's article. Roacj (talk) 19:44, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I think you should mention where Westminster College is because I know that there is more than one and elaborate more on what her job consisted of.ESchrader.8 (talk) 19:47, 27 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]