Talk:American transportation in the Siegfried Line campaign/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:14, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- "US forces were to supported over the Omaha and Utah Beaches" - missing a word?
- Added missing word. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- "but the Quai Homet was not yet ready to receive them" - can this be glossed? My work assumption is that this is a specific named dock or quay.
- Yes. Changed to Jetée du Homet to match the map. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- Why did Clay have such a short term in command of Normandy Base Section
- Too valuable. Changed to "temporary loan" to emphasis its short-term nature. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- Recommend consistency of Bailey bridge vs bailey bridge
- Capitalised. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 07:12, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
- Gloss/link POL on first usage, as it's not the most familiar acronym
- Sourcing and images all look fine.
Good work on a longer article. Placing on hold. Hog Farm Talk 04:08, 14 September 2021 (UTC)