Talk:American Gothic House/GA1

GA Review

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OK, beginning a review now. Looks promising. I often make simple copyedits as I go, but please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning. Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:10, 26 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The Dibbles lost the home to taxes around 1897... - not a usual usage in Australia, sounds odd. I know what you mean, though. Rephrasing and embellishing might be good here. Casliber (talk · contribs) 22:12, 26 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

a bullet had been fired in an upstairs bedroom - sounds intriguing, any more info?

Although the house was renovated in 1992, tourism to the area remains modest at best. - needs reference.

Be good to add dimensions - area of house and land, and any other attributes of the house as they are a little sparse.

~~Any other tourism details would be good too.~~

~~I don't think Fair Use rationale extends to more than one article. Casliber (talk · contribs) 13:06, 27 June 2009 (UTC)~~[reply]

Otherwise, looks good to pass. Casliber (talk · contribs) 12:14, 27 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Update - no deal-breakers left. Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:15, 24 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]