Talk:Always Be My Baby/GA1

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:03, 12 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"he says he'll always be a part of her" - no contractions, please
Choose either US (here) or U.S. (charts)
"a record she passed in the near future" - rewmove
"five in New Zealand, seventeen in Australia and top twenty" → number five in New Zealand, number seventeen in Australia and in the top twenty
The second and third paragraphs should be swapped around
Can you included the recording and release info in the article's body?

You add Seal's last name in the quote, but not Dupri's. Either way, be consistent

"(Da Brat would later go on to rap on remixes of "Honey" (1997), "I Still Believe" (1998), "Heartbreaker" (1999), "Loverboy" (2001), and "4real4real", an international bonus track for Carey's album, E=MC².)" - is this needed? If so, remove from brackets and reference
"Dance remixes with re-recorded vocals were produced by David Morales and Satoshi Tomiie of Def Mix Productions. There was also a reggae remix featuring Lil Vicious." - source?
"The US single includes a song called "Slipping Away"" - is this a B-side? If so, make this clear and add it to the infobox. Do you have a track listing?

Does File:Alwaybemybaby.jpg really add anything to a reader's understanding?
"The video concludes with scenes of the young boy and girl waling" - waling? really?
Who directed the second video?

Remove quote marks from Rainbow World Tour and Adventures of Mimi Tou (second times)