Talk:Alsos Mission/GA1
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Reviewer: Σ (talk · contribs) 01:30, 21 February 2012 (UTC)
- I've taken a quick look at it, and in general it is good. I will add some comments here after reading it more thoroughly. →Στc. 02:26, 21 February 2012 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- ...discern how far the Germans had gone towards creating an atomic bomb. I believe that discern German progress towards the creation of an atomic bomb. reads better.
- Sounds good. Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
- Alsos Mission personnel followed close behind the front lines...capture by the Soviet Union. Seems unnecessarily long. I would try splitting it in two.
Origin
[edit]- In 1943, Brigadier General Wilhelm D. Styer... Wikipedia:LINK#General_points_on_linking_style discourages links next to each other.
- Unavoidable. One is a rank and the other links to the name. I have had many Featured Articles with this. We can agree to disagree, as MOS:LINK is not required for GAN. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
- Fair enough. →Στc. 01:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
- Unavoidable. One is a rank and the other links to the name. I have had many Featured Articles with this. We can agree to disagree, as MOS:LINK is not required for GAN. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
- ...General George Marshall... Same as above.
- It was not restricted to those involving nuclear weapons. What was it restricted to, then? Or was it restricted at all?
- The Chief of Army Intelligence, Major General George V. Strong, appointed Lieutenant Colonel Boris Pash... Again, adjacent links.
Italy
[edit]- Pash met with Marshal of Italy Pietro Badoglio Adjacent links again.
- Is the whole first paragraph sourced to ref 12?
Western Europe
[edit]Britain
[edit]- ...radioactive poisons was sufficient to warn General Dwight D. Eisenhower... Adjacent links again.
France
[edit]Germany
[edit]- There is a single-sentence paragraph at the bottom, although it isn't a major concern.
- Actually it has two. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
Japan
[edit]- they met with the intelligence staff General of the Army Douglas MacArthur's AFPAC. Adjacent links.
Legacy
[edit]See also
[edit]- Please add {{clear}} at the bottom of the section.
→Στc. 06:28, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
- All done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:07, 23 February 2012 (UTC)
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