Talk:Aloysius Chidozie Ogbonna

About chief Aloysious

I added more sources to the article you sent to draft for improvement. But after clicking on publish, I didn't see the changes I made again. What could be the problem please? Danielehisaiguokhian (talk) 12:12, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Some revisions and notes

I submitted grammatical revisions today, Saturday Nov. 2, 16:21 GMT.

These were not minor edits but did preserve the original information in the article.

I removed extra phrases and embellishments that were not needed and touched up on some grammatical inconsistencies. This was done to maintain an encyclopedic tone. Noting that this article has been nominated for deletion, I thought this was necessary.

However, after completing edits, just before submitting, I read up on one of the sources referenced under the Personal Life header (linked here). It appears to me that significant portions of this article are copied (with minimal changes) from this source.

I would suggest more in-depth research as this is a more than valid reason to nominate this article for deletion.

Information under Early Life, Career, and Personal Life headers lacks in-line citations. In-line citations only begin under the Community Leadership header. I refrained from making any more edits under this header for fear of displacing citations.

I hope these edits and notes are helpful and informative!