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Reviewer: Utinsh (talk) 14:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I found only few issues:

Done. –J10S Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Overlinking; OGC Nice and Le Mans FC are linked multiple times in the body of the article.
Done. –J10S Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Referencing; His Bayern number assignment and nine yellow cards needs a reference each. "Bordeaux also recorded its second ever double, as a result of its league cup title" needs a cite too.
Done. –J10S Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Maybe split up Bordeaux section in two sub-sections as it is twice as long as any other section.
Done. –J10S Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Article could do with a bit more info on his personal life. Is he married/have kids? Education, current residency etc.
Done. Couldn't find anything on his education, though. –J10S Talk 19:44, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The prose is good, article is neutral and well sourced, references are well formatted and there are no dead links. I'll pass as a good article after you will have addressed the tiny issues I brought up. Utinsh (talk) 14:13, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]