Talk:Allan H. Kittleman

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Please be respectful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.85.58.237 (talk) 01:45, 14 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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This page is written like an ad. It needs a disclaimer and edit protection. 2600:4040:B4F0:3D00:5C68:BE76:1560:C754 (talk) 15:54, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tagged, I don't think this warrants a request for protection. VTVL (talk) 17:41, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've reworded much of the article, removing a lot of 'fluff' language and identifying two pararagh endings that are not sourced. If the article is still considered too much like an advertisement, please make specifics known. Otherwise, I propose removal of the banner. —ADavidB 14:56, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Love what you two did with it, thanks! I went in and added some more changes because some of the things in the County Executive section were unsupported by the cited sources (for example, the proposal for Long Reach was actually a draft proposal, Kittleman did not limit taxes and fees but rather oversaw a 15.5% budget increase, the linked source for the Harriet Tubman school preservation was just a picture of Kittleman at the school with no information regarding policies he may have taken related to it, and the linked source said nothing about him working with immigrant communities but rather said that he claimed discrimination was not an issue for immigrants in Howard County). Hope that was okay, I'm pretty new to Wikipedia so happy to make further changes if that would be better. I think the article ended up in a good place, though. 216.194.103.251 (talk) 17:48, 7 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your work. A while back I tried to fix his father's article that was in a worse mess. There is probably something I missed, but it looks way better than it was a while ago. This family's articles is cluttered with various uncited fluff. VTVL^Talk 18:41, 7 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Removed the tag VTVL (talk) 00:41, 5 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]