Talk:All My People/GA1

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:28, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Link music critics please to the article "Music journalism"
Link YouTube
You could mention something about the song's commercial success (or non-success)

Could you reword this sentence: "Stan made the release of new material public through her Facebook account, following which she posted the audio of "All My People" on Soundcloud.[4][1]" The second half of the sentence is confusing to me...
"alert rhythm and less lyrics" --> "alert rhythm and minimal lyrics"
"Lemonade" wasn't her previous single; "Cliche (Hush, Hush)" was

I'd make this it's own section, so title in "Critical reception" and the one above "Background"
Reword "Kevin Apaza, writing for Direct Lyrics, called the single very "catchy", naming it different from the "stuff" she had released before.[1] He went on into saying that he "just [doesn't] see [the track] as a European monster hit" and confessed that its lyrics and the video concept didn't "make much sense".[1]" to "Kevin Apaza, writing for Direct Lyrics, called the single very "catchy", naming it different from the "stuff" she had released before; he went on into saying that he "just [doesn't] see [the track] as a European monster hit" and confessed that its lyrics and the video concept didn't "make much sense".[1]" to reduce the redundancy of the same source

The "Digital remixes EP" should have its own separate track listing, much much like "Make Me Like You" does (for example)

Change column header of "Chart (2013-2014)" to "Chart (2013–14)"
In the suggestion directly above, make sure you use a "n-dash" and not a "hyphen"
Use the correct chart formatting located with help at this article (Template:Single chart); if you need help with this, let me know (I'd be happy to do it for you.) (Plus the Japan Hot 100 has no closing parentheses)

The United States' release date came first, so please add it as the first country in that chart
If the US release date is true, then the true release date of the single in 28 March 2013, not 1 May 2013

On hold for seven days. Just some minor things and corrections; great work as always! Good luck and cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:34, 10 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]

@Carbrera: Done everything apart from the chart formatting, as the official sites for the singles charts do not have the chart peaks. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 03:38, 11 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]