Talk:All Is Full of Love/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 13:31, 10 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Review coming soon... Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:31, 10 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@11JORN: Sorry for the delay. Unfortunately, I was very busy. I'm going to end this in the course of the next week. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 23:35, 16 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: No problem buddy, take your time. :) Alex ^talk 13:01, 17 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Before I'll give comments to this section, please be sure you follow the following structure for the lead:
- 1st paragraph: Name of the song and album, Released for digital download through LABEL, enlist songwriters & producers, info about the genre and instrumentation, etc
- 2nd paragraph: Music critics's opinion, Accolades?
- 3rd paragraph: Commercial success (charts & certs), Promotion: music video (when released?, where shot?, short plot, awards for the video?), Inclusion on any greatest hits/compilation CDs, live performances?

Infobox

Cover art for UK CD1 single → Cover artwork used to commercialize physical editions of the single.

Background and composition

original version of the track → you've already used "track" before; alternate here
It was inspired by the advent of spring → Who was inspired? It doesn't make any sense?
among other people, for six months, → Remove comma
Björk recalls: → She confessed;
David Hemingway, Björk said: "you have → David Hemingway, Björk explained; "you have
all over again;"[4] referring to Ragnarök. → all over again,"[4] referring to Ragnarök
The previous track, → Homogenic's track
stands for that death → stands for death
stands for that new beginning → stands for a new beginning
"believing in love" and that "love → "believing in love", and expressed that "love
As it opposes the rest of Homogenic's "macho" aesthethic, Björk has described "All Is Full of Love" as the first song on Vespertine. → This doesn't make any sense; do you mean she suggested it could have been included on Vespertine as well?
The lyrics begins → The lyrics begin
Your doors are shut," → The right order is , after "
have to "Twist → have to "twist
around you" that, "Love is all around you". → sentence is grammatically wrong
effected musically → other way round
accompaniment in the ambient song → accompaniment and portrays an ambient song
envisaged by Björk → envisaged by the singer (word repetition)
off into Björk gospel → off into [her] gospel (word repetition)
included in the album, → included on the album,
The best known version of the song, and the most preferred by fans and Björk herself, it is known by various names including "Mark Stent Mix" and "Video Mix". → Reportedly the best known and the most preferred version by Björk's fans and herself, it is further known under the names of "Mark Stent Mix" and "Video Mix".

Release

Full of Love", remixed by German → Full of Love", containing a remix by German
This remix had been included → This remix had been (previously/later?) included
Add year of release for "Hunter" in bracktes
had been released as a B-side of → had been distributed as a B-side for
a single in promotion of an album → a single for promoting an album
music video was more → accompanying music video would be more
again and[18] → you don't need a ref here
though the release of the single → although the premiere of the single (word repetition)
"All Is Full of Love" was released → Subsequently, "All Is Full of Love" was distributed (word repetition)
in VHS → in VHS format
Some regard → Some publications regard
In the UK, it was also released → In the United Kingdom, it was made available (word rep.)
consists of stills → consists of shots
can be seen in the video as well → can be seen in the visual, as well (word rep.)
of the 2002 → of the singer's 2002
whose tracks were selected → you've already used "track" before
through a survey. "All Is Full of Love" was the second most voted song, coming after "Hyperballad". → through a survey, in which the single was the second most-voted song after "Hyperballad" (1996).

Critical reception

In a review for the album as a whole → While reviewing Homogenic,
"sublime rebirth."[12] Tiny Mix Tapes commented → "sublime rebirth", and Tiny Mix Tapes commented
Unlink "Music Tech" as it's red linked
AllMusic's Heather Phares → no full names twice, please
Slant Magazine → italics
their list of The 100 Best Singles of the 1990s writing: → their list of "The 100 Best Singles of the 1990s", writing;

Music video

Björk contacted Cunningham and they met at his London office → This resulted in the singer contacting him to meet at his London office
Björk recalls: "I → Regrading this, the singer confessed, "I
was very white ... and I'm trying → ... to [...]
just clean ... And I think → ... to [...]
he wrote down the words → he reportedly wrote down the words
"surgery". The words outline → "surgery"; they outline
the music video and says, "It's like Karma → the music video. Concerning this, Cunningham added that "it's like Karma
Initially, there would be a final stage where the two robots unfolded like a flower as they mate, revealing → Initially, it was planned that as the visual's final stage, the two protagonist robots from the clip would unfold like a flower as they mate, revealing
could not manage to do it → could not manage to materialize this thought
and Cunningham has said that "perhaps → to which Cunningham said that "perhaps
Link Aphex Twin

It's already linked, no need to do it twice

Add release date for "Windowlicker" in brackets
The treatment describes → past tense please, and what do you mean with "the treatment"?

The treatment is what the video is supposed to be before it is filmed.

The director was, however, dissatisfied → However, the music video's director was dissatisfied
He exemplified: "on → He exemplified, "on
He first shot → He reportedly first shot
seconds; he then removed → seconds, and then removed
eyes and mouth were actually used; the rest of the robot head was 3D animation → eyes and mouth were used, with the rest of the robot representing 3D animation
He has described the filming process as an unpleasant experience: → Glasswork has described the filming process as an unpleasant experience,
For the quote, fix all the ... to [...]
Björk stated, "I guess → Concerning this, the singer stated, "I guess
I've edited the synopsis by myself, just as I do with every GAN that I take for review
wrote the video "marked → wrote the visual "marked (word repetition)
"All Is Full of Love" music video as one → "All Is Full of Love" clip for being one
Video in the Music Week → "in" to "at"
In the D&AD Awards → At the D&AD Awards
In the MVPA Awards → Furthermore, at the MVPA Awards
two awards in the 2000 MTV Video Music Awards: → "in" to "at"
Music Video in the 2000 International Monitor Awards, → Music Video at the 2000 International Monitor Awards (FULL STOP)
The video has also received various → Particularly, the visual won various nominations
Please fix "in" to "at" for the remaining nominations
"All Is Full of Love" placed on number 14 → "All Is Full of Love" was placed at number 14
and was placed in Time's list → and was ranked in Time's (link the magazine) list

It's already linked in the article, no need to do it twice

fifth greatest → fifth-greatest
as old marble;" a clear reference to "All Is Full of Love" → as old marble", as a reference to "All Is Full of Love"
the 2015 American film → Remove overfluous "the"

Live performances

regarding Homogenic → concerning Homogenic
she would later wear → she would later sport (word rep.)
Add release year in brackets for "Bachelorette"
of the set list of the → of the set list for her
and the Icelandic String Octet → remove overfluous "the"
of 2001 → in 2001
The tour was performed in concert halls and opera houses so as to "have → During the tour, the singer performed in concert halls and opera houses in order to "have
(which included a performance of "All Is Full of Love") → , which included...
also be found in → also be found on
was released in Vespertine Live → was released through Vespertine Live
included in the 2006 → included on the 2006
String Octet, but with the addition of Vespertine World Tour collaborators Matmos and Zeena Parkins → String Octet and Matmos and Zeena Parkins (unlink here)
included in the 2005 → included on the 2005

Usage in media and cover versions

included in the official soundtrack → included on the official soundtrack
in the soundtrack → on the soundtrack
The song was also used in the → "All Is Full of Love" was further used for the (alternating)
and placed it on → and added it to
"Love Is Dead", from → no comma

Track listings

flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

Credits adapted from Homogenic's and "All Is Full of Love" single liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Homogenic (unlink) and the single's physical release.

Charts

However, in the United States → Remove "however"
peaking at number eight → To alternate, state "reaching number eight" here.

Other stuff

Copy-violation

72.6% is WAY too much! Please reduce to under 40% for the most-violated sources at the top of the list

Images and others

The image with the logo of the single's releases brings nothing to the article, and please remove it thus.
Other images seem to be stable
Audio samples stable, as well ;)

Links

No problems here!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)
No dead links! Good job!

On hold for 7 days! Good job! Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:22, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: I think all the issues have been addressed. Thanks for the review! Alex ^talk 18:07, 26 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@11JORN: Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:35, 26 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.