Talk:All India Institute of Medical Sciences, Jodhpur

All India Institute of Medical Sciences, Jodhpur was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (March 12, 2022). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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Dear Wikipedia Author, I am from Rajasthan and will surely try to improve this article by adding reliable references & citations wherever possible. This Medical university is recently opened, so the inclusion of knowledge about it on Wikipedia is quite essential and always appreciated.

Chu86happychu 20:14, 17 November 2012 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedia Author, since 2012, much has changed for this Institute (All India Institute of Medical Sciences, Jodhpur). The institute has excelled in multiple domains- patient care during COVID-19, innovations in healthcare, excellence in medical education, teaching methods and training MBBS, PG, Superspeciality and PhD. Institute started joint program with IIT Jodhpur. I may be able to contribute more.

Genesguy (talk) 16:29, 28 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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All India Institute of Medical Sciences, Jodhpur

All India Institute of Medical Sciences (AIIMS) Jodhpur is one of the six AIIMS created under AIIMS Act (Amended 2012) as Institute of National Importance. Over a period of 9 years, they have done reasonably well in enhancing the quality of medical education, research and patient care. AIIMS Jodhpur is a public teaching hospital and may be labeled as Institute of Higher education High importance.Genesguy (talk) 15:23, 11 February 2022 (UTC) Genesguy (talk) 18:31, 10 March 2022 (UTC) Genesguy (talk) 13:05, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 19:49, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for submitting this article at GAN. Unfortunately, it fails multiple aspects of the good article criteria, and should be failed until these issues are remedied. There are two major issues here.

The first is citations. Everything in the article should be backed up with a reference to a reliable source. The back half of sections like "Location" and "AIIMS Jodhpur Model of Medical Education" are unreferenced, as are entire sections like "AIIMS Hospital" and "Student activities". The basis of poor citations alone would be enough to necessitate an immediate failure of this article.

However, while I am here, I also want to comment on the prose. This article is very difficult to read, with short choppy sections that contain very dense paragraphs. I am going to make two recommendations. First, at a larger level, it is a good idea to look at examples of good articles in the field you want to promote to get an idea of what a good article in that subject looks like. We have lots of university good articles like Indian Institute of Management Rohtak, Indian Institute of Management Lucknow, and Geisel School of Medicine. Then, on a smaller line-by-line level, I would recommend going through the Guild of Copy Editors not now, but after making the earlier changes I suggested, to help with how the text reads.

In conclusion: I am failing this article for now. Add references, add content, and look at similar good articles, then go to the GOCE for a copy edit before resubmitting. — Ghost River 19:49, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]