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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "the new boundary restores Vision".
- "childrens' television networks" → "children's television networks"
- "to the Maximoff's childhood" – rephrase
- "they were turned them into jokes" – rephrase
- Be consistent with Art of VFX or The Art of VFX.
- Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:57, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: These have been addressed. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:26, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
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