Talk:Ali Shah Bukhari

This article was nominated for deletion on 16 April 2022. The result of the discussion was soft delete.

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I've added tags to the article for issues which need to addressed. Please feel free to fix the issues and remove each tag when complete.

The page is 1200+ words long and features only two references, and only 4 in-line citations (one of which is in the lede); pre-existing tags regarding further need for better referencing placed by User:Arjayay also need to be addressed;
The article is peppered with weasel words and phraseology—perhaps indicative of original research or possible C.O.I.— just a few examples being: "He had a broad vision."; "born in a noble Syed family"; "...a champion of his religion, a leader of men,a capable administrator, a persuasive orator and a chivalrous opponent." [sic] (sounds like Superman);
Punctuation and spacing are horrible—copy editing is needed badly; the Lede needs a rewrite per Wikipedia:Manual of Style.
There is a possibility of Ownership being shown towards the article by it's creator, contrary to Wikipedia principles.

Please refrain from removing the tags until these issues are addressed. Regards, GenQuest ^{"Talk to Me"} 05:38, 25 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]