Talk:Ali Guarneros Luna

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Peer Review CIS-50

Going through the article, Ali has been very successful and caught my eye especially for the Hellas Planitia. Here are somethings to consider with Ali:

- Cite your sources. I do not see any references listed in your article.

- Lead needs a little more information. From what Brianda has given my team for the lead this is what I got out of it: Name, Year born, Nationality, Degrees, what they are known for and positions held. (Note you do have 3 of them already in that sentence)

- If they can be linked to other wiki pages recommend doing that like NASA and Hellas Planitia.

- For career paragraph, when and where she had these positions. When tying all these things together ensure they are are in order to make things easier for the readers to travel the time path as her.

- There was a sentence that did not make sense:

"Luna and team" are working to learn about where dust storms occur on certain areas of a planet called Hellas Planitia

What team?

Really excited to see how the article will be finished. Good luck team! Drchaos8605 (talk) 06:47, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]