Talk:Alexandra Kiroi-Bogatyreva/GA2
GA Review
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Nominator: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 01:57, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
Shall review in a few days ^ Arconning (talk) 06:56, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Riley1012 Here are my comments! Arconning (talk) 13:03, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks @Arconning: I believe I have addressed all your comments. -Riley1012 (talk) 22:27, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
[edit]Lead and infobox
[edit]- There's some things that need citing that are present here. The post nominal OLY (Olympians don't automatically have this postnominal as they have to apply for it first), her height, her nicknames, her club, and her coach all need citations.
Done, and I removed the OLY postnomial because I couldn't find a source. -Riley1012 (talk) 22:27, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Early life
[edit]- Full name and birthdate should be used and sourced here as it's not sourced anywhere else in the article.
- Her mother, Valeriya, was a dancesport competitor, commas used here could be omitted.
- Done -Riley1012 (talk) 22:27, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Junior career
[edit]- No issues.
Senior career
[edit]- She also won gold medals with the Victorian team and with the hoop, ball, and ribbon., could specify what "Victorian team" means, though I assume it's Victoria as in the Australian state. Could also merge the next two sentences with this paragraph.
- Done -Riley1012 (talk) 22:27, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Personal life
[edit]- No issues though quite short.
Competitive history
[edit]- No issues.
Awards and accolades
[edit]- Where's the source that cites Kiroi-Bogatyreva's AMP Foundation Tomorrow Maker Grant?
- Done, and I created a table for this section -Riley1012 (talk) 22:27, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
Media
[edit]- Images have proper licenses, relevant to the article, and have proper captions.
Refs
[edit]- Earwig shows violation unlikely
- Random ref check: 1, 9, 17, 23, 36, 37, 42, 46, 62, 79. All good.
Misc
[edit]- No ongoing edit war, neutral, broad information around the article.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.