Talk:Alexander Onassis/Archive 1

Archive 1

Full of POV & weasel terms

E.g. "Approximately two years later, Aristotle [Onassis] died too, and was buried beside Alexander. Many people have said or written that Alexander's death was the end for Aristotle, in terms of his desire to go on living, that he died in all but fact along with Alexander". The text needs clean up. I'll leave it up for awhile. -The Gnome (talk) 12:03, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

"Their bond exceeded the normal ties of a brother and sister"

What the heck does that mean? If this highly subjective and unsubstantiated statement is to stay, (I say "nay"), it's imperative to define just what exactly are "normal ties" between a brother and a sister. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.142.68.243 (talk) 19:21, 30 September 2007 (UTC)

Rosey

Alexander was at Le Rosey, but only for four hours. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.254.132.106 (talk) 12:48, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Apparently, there is no compulsory schooling in Greece. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.241.17.133 (talk) 18:23, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

There is some now. This might not have been so earlier. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.241.17.133 (talk) 18:31, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

GA Review

@SNUGGUMS:, this review was done well, but I believe that all these issues could be fixed easily. User:Gareth E Kegg is a very productive user and putting it on hold would be better. You should revert your edit and put it on hold for the issues to be fixed. Thanks,  ΤheQ Editor  ^Talk? 00:57, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

The problem is that there were too many issues for such a short article, TheQ Editor. That's why I failed without putting it on hold. No prejudice against a quick renomination after issues have been addressed or taking this to WP:GAR, though. Snuggums (talk / edits) 01:22, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

I've fixed all the issues SNUGGUMS suggested. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 11:48, 15 November 2014 (UTC)