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File has now been replaced with: Alex D. Henderson Jr.jpg. --Greg Henderson (talk) 21:29, 11 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion

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Graywalls Please explain removal of multiple images of parents? I've seen this used effectively with Abraham Lincoln and other wiki bio pages. I think it adds valid info on page. Thanks! --Greg Henderson (talk) 16:56, 11 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia is not a place to share family photos, promote family members, etc. Also, removing page view graph as this is not something typically done. Graywalls (talk) 21:07, 11 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit A

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 Not done Please familiarize yourself with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines, as many other editors have suggested. This is trivia that is being supported by primary sources, which are not considered WP:NPOV independent reliable sources. Netherzone (talk) 22:06, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Netherzone I understand your point. Below is a secondary source from Pat Mangan from the Miami Hearld. Is this OK? New Mental Clinic's 'Busting' With Pride.--Greg Henderson (talk) 22:33, 16 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is a bit uncertain because it doesn't say how much stock was donated, or the fact he was donating to his own organization it probably involved tax breaks that benefited Henderson, its importance is not well established. -- GreenC 20:33, 4 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit B

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Can someone remove the WP:COI tag? It looks like a cleanup has been done to comply with Wikipedia's content policies WP:WTRMT. --Greg Henderson (talk) 19:22, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done Given that you have continued to edit your COI articles, not declared all of your articles with which you have a COI, that you have difficulty understanding NPOV as a connected editor, and COI edited for seven years. I have to say no. Netherzone (talk) 20:22, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Correction, Since July 26, I am now using the Request edits on talk pages and not editing my COI articles. I have made a COI declaration on my user page. I have reviewed and understand the WP:NPOV guidelines. Please let me know what else I need to do for the tag removal?--Greg Henderson (talk) 20:35, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Removed. I have gone through the article and made some changes as have others. I've added the article to my watchlist. The purpose of the tag is not to control behavior of editors. If the editor continues unwanted behavior take it to ANI. -- GreenC 20:11, 4 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit C

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@Greghenderson2006: Please add a new template for new edit requests. –MJL ‐Talk‐☖ 03:43, 7 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Greg Henderson, done. -- GreenC 20:16, 4 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Request Edit D

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  • Information to be added or removed: I would like improve this article by adding the following citation: "In 1960, Henderson and his wife Lucy gave the Henderson Behavioral Health clinic a donation, which helped build the building and furnishings in Fort Lauderdale, Florida. The clinic was renamed Henderson Clinic of Broward County in 1961."
  • Explanation of issue: Article needs citations that are verifiable and neutral to article.
  • References supporting change: Add the following citation: History and Mental Clinic Gets A Home.--Greg Henderson (talk) 15:49, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Added to article but reworded to more appropriately meet Puffery, NPOV standards. For citation, category only included RS citation, rather than the first person source. Go4thProsper (talk) 18:32, 14 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit E

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  • Information to be added or removed: I would like add to the Military section to the last paragraph the text: Henderson was discharged from the Army on January 28, 1919.
  • Explanation of issue: Article needs citations that are verifiable and neutral to article.
  • References supporting change: same Fold3 citation. --Greg Henderson (talk) 22:04, 15 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comment. Please see the comment made by S. Rich at Talk:Alexander_D._Henderson_(businessman)#Notability it becomes the question of whether things should be included if it can only be located on primary source government records. There's such records in government records for ANYBODY that's been married or been in the service, however if such records are the only things that even talk about it, adding the contents solely based off of that is a due weight matter. If a newspaper article in the journalist's own writing identifies the record, that's one thing, but if an Wikipedia editor locates the primary source record and match the name to article subject person, that is doing WP:OR by interpreting primary source on their own. What I am saying is that if primary sources, or crummy sources like Familysearch and Findgrave are the only sources that include that information, then we seriously ought to consider omitting those information. The primary concern is that many of these Henderson and Ford articles appear to have the framework based on that Henderson Family Tree website and simply trying to cobble together sources to fit around the contents you desire to include. Graywalls (talk) 15:56, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Possibly and Netherzone:, as users who have been involved on this matter, do you have any thoughts on above comment? Graywalls (talk) 15:59, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Graywalls, I'm trying to AGF, however the recent lapse back to COI editing was disappointing to see. Especially since some good, productive work was done in the meantime.
Primary sources should be avoided. It is unclear if some of the recent edit requests are being made just to add the names of grandfathers, grandmothers, uncles or children and are not really relevant to the biography itself. As discussed previously, WP is not a genealogy website, that is what sites like Ancestry.com, MyHeritage, OneGreatFamily, LegacyTree and others are for. Another option is for the editor has to record his ancestry and lower-quality links to own website: Henderson Family Tree website which already exists.
Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and biographic articles do not need to include every bit of minutia or trivial mention out there. There already have been several errors introduced into more than one article by cobbling together bits and pieces from FamilySearch and FindGrave.
Some details could be simply added to the infobox, and do not need lengthy prose. For example, IMO it's enough that the info box says 2 children. If he was married more than once, it's enough that the infobox lists two spouses. It is not necessary to to include the month and year and place where he was married and divorced (see edit requests below.) Netherzone (talk) 16:49, 18 February 2021 (UTC) Forgot ping Possibly Netherzone (talk) 16:55, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
In all the other articles, I felt he really dragged his feet before he finally clearly revealed on his page which articles he has COI with. I see he's working on creating yet another article on Ford/Henderson family relatives, with a bunch of trivial mention snippets that merely mentions their presence at meeting and such. See Draft:Tirey_L._Ford_Jr. Graywalls (talk) 22:19, 18 February 2021 (UTC) I was replying to @Netherzone: Graywalls (talk) 22:20, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Currently trying to go through the backlog on COI edit requests; I'm going to mark this as declined based upon the above conversation. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 03:44, 16 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit F

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 Done Edit complete. Boredathome101 (talk) 09:32, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit G

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 Done : edit done. Boredathome101 (talk) 09:37, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit H

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 Done edit was acceptable and completed. Boredathome101 (talk) 09:42, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit I

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  • Information to be added or removed: I would like to add the fact that Henderson setup a foundation.
  • Explanation of issue: Editor would like to include this under the section Philanthropy.
  • References supporting change: Add the following citation: The A. D. Henderson Foundation was founded in 1959 by Henderson and his wife, Lucy E. Henderson with the vision to improving the lives of children in Broward County, Florida and the State of Vermont through early learning.[1]

--Greg Henderson (talk) 19:14, 21 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You can't use a self reference. Is there any news or other source about it? Boredathome101 (talk) 03:21, 23 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "The A. D. Henderson Foundation". hendersonfdn.org. Retrieved July 21, 2021.

The requester has not responded in eight months, so I am closing this request. A new request can be opened below when sources are found. Z1720 (talk) 01:04, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit J

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 Not done per WP:NOTGENEALOGY. There is no reason to include a family tree in this article. Greg, you have done some great work on Wikipedia, but please refrain from using the encyclopedia as a venue for your family geneaology. There have been many discussions about this over the years involving multiple editors and notice boards. Please use one of the ancestry sites for this type of information, such as Ancestry.com, FamilySearch.org or your own personal Henderson geneaology website. Best regards, Netherzone (talk) 17:09, 15 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Netherzone: Thank you for your comments. This was an old template I created on my user page several years ago to see how this type of template works. I have not used it on any articles until Nigej brought it to my attention. I do not see the harm in using it, however, I will defer to your judgement. Please see other editors that have included a family tree in their article: List of family trees for US. --Greg Henderson (talk) 17:37, 15 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Those are essentially royal families on the List of family trees. It's a little different. Netherzone (talk) 17:52, 15 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Request Edit K

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  • Please add the following text and citation under the "Philanthropy" section, after the sentence: "In 1953, Henderson created the Hillsboro Country Day School in Pompano Beach, Florida."
    • The A. D. Henderson Foundation was founded in 1959 by Henderson and his wife, Lucy, to help improve the education and support systems for children to ensure that "all children reach their full potential." Since 1993, over $69 million has been invested in communities in South Florida and the State of Vermont.[1]

Greg Henderson (talk) 19:16, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Path to Prosperity Spotlight – The A.D. Henderson Foundation". Florida Chamber of Commerce. February 27, 2023. Retrieved January 28, 2024.
 Not done The Florida Chamber of Commerce would not be considered a reliable source due to its intent on promoting this foundation. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 21:53, 26 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@P,TO 19104: Thanks for checking out this edit request by a blocked user. What do you think with this source? It appears to an acceptable source here: Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources. Here is the revised setence and source:

"The A. D. Henderson Foundation was founded in 1969 to help in educational purposes.[1] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gredhenderson2006 (talk • contribs)

Greghenderson2006, why are you referring to yourself in the third person and not signing your comments? BTW, the ref provided is simply a database listing that simply charts 990's which are user-submitted content. That is not the same as having an independently written article by ProPublica. Netherzone (talk) 16:56, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done

no Declined There is clearly no consensus for this change to be made. Left guide (talk) 23:49, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Discussion ongoing...
Here is the correct source that provides the information that Henderson established the Hillsboro County Day School.[2] Greg Henderson (talk) 22:56, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

no Declined The provided newspaper clipping does not support that the entity "The A. D. Henderson Foundation" was founded nor that it's founded date was 1969. —Sirdog (talk) 02:15, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edit Requst for text that was removed

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References

  1. ^ "A. D. Henderson Foundation, Inc". ProPublica. 2023. Retrieved 2024-07-30.
  2. ^ "Henderson Services Set For Monday". Fort Lauderdale News. Fort Lauderdale, Florida. July 10, 1964. p. 2.
  3. ^ Henderson, Alexander (1900). "United States Census, 1900" (Database). The U.S. National Archives and Records Administration (NARA).
  4. ^ Henderson, Alexander (1920). "United States Census, 1920" (Database). The U.S. National Archives and Records Administration (NARA).

Greg Henderson (talk) 00:22, 1 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done No longer need to do this. See next edit request below. Greg Henderson (talk) 22:47, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edit Request - Early life

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  • Under the Early life section, after the setence: "Alexander D. Henderson was born on February 16, 1895, in Brooklyn, New York."
  • Add the sentence: "He was the son of A. D. Henderson of Suffern."[1]

References

  1. ^ "Pretty Anthony - Henderson Wedding Robs Ridgewood of Charming Daughter". Ridgewood Herald-News. Ridgewood, New Jersey. February 20, 1920. p. 1. Retrieved 2024-03-06.

Greg Henderson (talk) 22:30, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done — Antrotherkus Talk to me! 20:39, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Edit Request - Add reliable primary source

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    • Under Early life it should say: Alexander D. Henderson was born on February 16, 1895, in Brooklyn, New York.[1]
    • Please add birth date and place to infobox and to intro dates.

References

  1. ^ "Record of service forms (discharge card), Form No. 84c-1, A.G.O" (Discharge Card). United States Army. March 17, 1921. Retrieved 2024-07-31.

Greg Henderson (talk) 00:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Encoded  Talk 💬 09:07, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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