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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:35, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:35, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
- Is there any info on the 2005 and 2009 Mosconi Cups? It's not in his career section.
- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Lely would be a part of the successful team at the 2008 Mosconi Cup." Probably should add that he was the non-playing captain.
- added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Don't see the reason to duplicate refs 4, 6, and 23 from one source.
- Combined Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- And also, probably not the right quote for the latter. "It was my debut in the World Pool Masters and I was collecting autographs of my fellow competitors" is what I found in the ref.
- removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Add publishers to references, and archive dates need to be fixed for consistency.
- "thanks to his win at the Masters." ProPool might be a better source, since it shows that he was on the team unlike AZBilliards.
- Changed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Despite surprisingly" WP:EDITORIAL.
- Reworded Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 11 (Billiard-Walker) doesn't show year 2000.
- Changed ref Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 15 needs an archive link.
- No need to link Ralf Souquet more than once.
- fixed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Any chance you can translate the name of the Polish player that Lely defeated in the 2005 European Pool Championships Eight-ball event?
- Yah, it's my boy Tomasz Kapłan. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Would be a good idea to add that the reference is in Russian too.
- Tagged Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "2007 WPA World Nine-ball Championship he retired" Comma after championship.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- For ref 19, the author should be put in the right location in {{cite web}}.
- Ref 20 needs a date.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 26 has an author.
- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Maybe it's just me, but Ref 28 looks really sketchy compared to other sources used.
- Sadly, that was just the quality of the old World Pool Masters site. I don't think the WPA fixed the site very quickly after they inherited it. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Pictures are fine; OTRS approved.
- Ideal. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:38, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- Should cover it, Nova Crystallis. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:56, 25 May 2020 (UTC)