Talk:Alex: The Life of a Child

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Multiple issues

There are multiple issues with this article which must be addresses. Some specific comments:

It appears to be a notable topic but there are insufficient references to third party reliable sources demonstrating significant coverage. Many of the references are simply citations to the book itself which is not a third party source.
The sections Early Years and Final Years are excessive plot summary. Articles should contain commentary about the subject and its reception not just a description of the plot.
The WP:MOSBOLDTITLE should not contain a wikilink.

Polyamorph (talk) 07:43, 7 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]