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Former good article nomineeAlex, Jorge y Lena was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
February 4, 2012Good article nomineeNot listed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 24, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that three singer-songwriters formed the supergroup Alex, Jorge y Lena?


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Reviewer: Aircorn (talk · contribs) 14:35, 4 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    The prose still needs quite a bit of work. Some of the grammar is poor and their are a few words to watch. The recording and release section could probab;y be broken up a bit (either into seperate sections or paragraphs) as it is a bit wall of text like at the moment. That title is a bit awkward too, I woyuld suggest just using the album title.
    Alex, Jorge y Lena is formed by Cuban singer-songwriter Lena Burke, Spanish performer Álex Ubago and Colombian lyricist Jorge Villamizar Grammar
    The following year Villamizar was introduced to Burke in Miami, where Burke met Ubago the next year (2006) while he was promoting an album Confusing
    since they share a friendship with him Repitition
    The newly formed ensemble was welcomed enthusiastically by Warner Music. Weasal wording
    His album Fantasía o Realidad was released in 2004, as was very successful as his first Grammar
    Villamizar described their collaboration, saying that Redundancy (describe and saying)
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    References are present. Spot checks not done. Someone familiar with spanish may need to check for reliability.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    I know it is hard for a relatively new band, but I feel the article is to brief. Are there any live performances (outside the award show) that could be mentioned? Some information about music style. At this stage you are probably best splitting the last section into possibly four seperate paragraphs descibing the making of the album, the performance of the album, reception, and awards (expanding on each if posible)
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
    Hard to tell without checking the sources
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Not applicable. You could probably justify a non-free promo shot or album cover.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Sorry there is still too much work to do, especially with the prose. You may want to ask some other editors to copy-edit it before nominating again. Some could be found at here AIRcorn (talk) 15:10, 4 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]


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