Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2012/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:59, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Followed through with my previous comment; I will start reviewing this today! --K. Peake 09:59, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Wikilink Festivali i Këngës in the infobox
Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
Wikilink music video
"on 26 May," → "on 26 May 2012,"

Background

"it achieved during its debut in 2004" → "it achieved in 2004" since that year has already been introduced as the country's debut earlier in this para

Before Eurovision

Festivali i Këngës

Add to the img text that the competition was used to select Albania's participant for the Eurovision Song Contest 2012
"The national broadcaster," → "The national broadcaster of Albania,"
Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
"to select Albania's participant" → "to select their participant"
"shortlisted to compete" → "that were shortlisted to compete"
"few days prior" → "a few days prior"
"it ultimately released" → "RTSH ultimately released"

Competing entries

See MOS:TABLECAPTION; you did not add this for the 2019 one here but I have fixed that for you; try a similar caption

Shows

Semi-finals

"semi-final with ten entries" → "semi-final, with 10 entries" per MOS:NUM

Final

"Each member of the jury voted by..." where is this part backed up?
Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest

Promotion

"An accompanying music video for" → "A music video for"
"premiered on the official YouTube channel of the Eurovision Song Contest on" → "premiered via the Eurovision Song Contest's official YouTube channel on"
"at various Eurovision Song Contest-related events," → "at various events related to the contest,"
Remove wikilinks on the countries

At Eurovision

Img looks good
"held on 22 and 24 May, and" → "held on 22 and 24 May, respectively, and"
"Spain, and the United Kingdom," → "Spain and the United Kingdom," since the article is not in American English
Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012#Final
"the country was set to" → "Albania was set to"
"would be performing third," → "would be performing third in the grand final,"
"and preceding the Lithuania." → "and preceding Lithuania."

Voting

"in the contest's semi-final and final," → "in both the first semi-final and the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2012,"
"and in the final of the contest to Greece." → "and to Greece in the final of the contest."

Points awarded to Albania

Good

Points awarded by Albania

Good

References

Copyvio score is somewhat high at 47.4%, but comparing led to me finding out that this is only because of the tables' information, so it is fine with the context given
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
WP:OVERLINK of European Broadcasting Union on refs 2, 11, 12, 14, 15, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24 and 25

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed, though it is good to see you picked up on a number of my previous comments for this article! --K. Peake 14:48, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake:Hope you're well. Thanks for another review; I responded to all your suggestions.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:26, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Iaof2017: Thank you for implementing the changes and I did some moderate copy editing, plus the query about each member of the jury voting is invalid since I checked the source properly and found the info; my error there. ✓ Pass now, plus I do now recall reviewing GANs of yours before the Eurovision Song Contest articles after looking at your work! --K. Peake 16:04, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you also for your edits. Bes regards!--Lorik17 (talk) 16:09, 5 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]