Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2006/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:16, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Not too sure why the timestamp is not working, but I will review this shortly! --K. Peake 18:16, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Florian Kondi is not sourced as the songwriter anywhere in the body despite the infobox mention
• Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
• Target previous contest to Eurovision Song Contest 2005
• "the Eurovision Song Contest," → "the Eurovision Song Contest 2006,"
• "Performing as number sixth," → "Performing as number six,"

Background

• "The highest placing" → "The country's highest placing"
• "which the country achieved in" → "which it achieved in"
• "The country's national broadcaster," → "Albania's national broadcaster,"
• "organises Festivali i Këngës since" → "has organised Festivali i Këngës since"
• "simultaneously wins the right to" → "has simultaneously won the right to"

Before Eurovision

Festivali i Këngës

• "The national broadcaster of Albania, Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH), organised the" → "RTSH organised the"
• Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës
• "to determine their participant" → "to determine Albania's participant"
• "and Albanian presenter Drini Zeqo." → "and presenter Drini Zeqo." since the use of "Albanian" earlier in the sentence makes his nationality clear

Competing entries

• Good

Shows

Semi-finals

• "on 16 December and 17 December 2005." → "on 16 December and 17 December 2005, respectively."

Final

• "Luiz Ejlli with "Zjarr e ftohtë" emerged as the winner of the competition" → "Luiz Ejlli emerged as the winner with "Zjarr e ftohtë""
• Where does the source mention his win as being before the end of the show?
• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2006

At Eurovision

• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2006
• Target Nikos Galis Olympic Indoor Hall to O.A.C.A. Olympic Indoor Hall
• "on 18 May, and the final" → "on 18 May and the final" because this article is not written in American English
• Target to Rules of the Eurovision Song Contest should solely be on "Eurovision rules" text
• "and the "Big 4"," → "and the "Big Four"," per MOS:LINK2SECT
• "although the top ten countries" → "although the top 10 countries" per MOS:NUM
• "Due to the non-top 10 result the 2005 contest," → "Due to its non-top 10 result in the 2005 contest,"
• The source does not mention Albania's result in the 2005 contest

Voting

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks very good at 13.8%!
• Cite ESCToday as publisher for ref 6
• Ref 7 has been missed; make sure that is archived alongside the others

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but it is great to take this on as you have been nominating these articles again! --K. Peake 21:36, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Hello Kyle Peake, thank you for the review. I responded to all your comments.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:19, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Lorik17 ✓ Pass now, very good to wake up to this and nice find in changing non-top 10 to non-top 11 from the source you added! --K. Peake 07:12, 18 January 2021 (UTC)