Talk:Albania at the 2006 Winter Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 23:14, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"and have competed in every Summer Olympics since then." - Remove "then"
"Albania has never won a medal at the Olympics" - "The nation has never won a medal at the Olympics"

"On 18 February, Tola took part in the Super-G competition, he finished the single-run rac ein a time of one minute and forty-four seconds, earning him 56th place, which was last among competitors who managed to finish the race" --> "On 18 February, Tola took part in the Super-G competition. He finished the single-run race in a time of 1 minute and 44, placing 56th; the last among competitors who finished the race"
I'm pretty sure this is a non-issue but why is "Super-G" capitalize but not "giant slalom"?

NO clue, but skiing does it consistently. Courcelles (talk) 23:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"posting leg times of one minute and thirty seconds and one minute and thirty-two seconds." - Change to something like "...posting run times of 1 minute and 30 seconds, and 1 minute and 32 seconds, respectively."
"His combined total was good for 35th place out of 41 competitors who finished both runs" --> "His combined total places him in 35th place out of 41 competitors who finished both runs"
"On 25 February, he participated in the slalom, but was unable to finish the race" - Any chance there is a source somewhere that maybe mentions he fell or something (other than "unable to finish")? If nothing can be found, no worries.

I looked, I can find lots of sources that record the DNF, but nothing that expounds on it. It's most likely a fall, because a missed gate results in a disqualification, not a DNF, but that'd be pure OR to put in. Courcelles (talk) 23:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've addressed everything, no in-line responses this time, {{u}Dom497}}, but thanks for another review. Courcelles (talk) 23:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
re-ping, Dom497 Courcelles (talk) 23:43, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This is just a preference of mine since it makes it easier to read the text (you can decide whether or not to make the changes): Where citations are included in the middle of the sentence just move it to end of the sentence.

Ususally I agree, but given I needed different pages to cite the different run times, I wanted to be as explicit as possible. Courcelles (talk) 23:44, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Good work! On hold but my comments should be pretty easy to address.--Dom497 (talk) 23:28, 1 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: If you agree with the two edits I made in the article then we are all done here!--Dom497 (talk) 00:56, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]