Talk:Alban Lafont/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

I should have this done by Sunday JAGUAR  11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   The lead needs to be expanded to summarise all of the article. At the moment it doesn't comply per WP:LEAD

   "He spent six years with Lattoise before signing with Ligue 1 side Toulouse in 2014." - this needs a citation

   "when a group of armed gunmen opened fire in a Cappuccino restaurant" - I don't think this needs italicising

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   No original research found.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I'll leave this on hold until the lead can be expanded to summarise the article. Otherwise everything is OK. JAGUAR  18:20, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

Hi Jaguar, thank you for the review! I have expanded the lede as requested. Let me know if there are any other issues that pop up. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 22:28, 3 June 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for addressing all of the issues! Most importantly the lead has been expanded to a suitable length so I think this should be good to go now. JAGUAR  10:05, 4 June 2017 (UTC)