Talk:Al-Hasan al-A'sam/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:27, 3 January 2020 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:27, 3 January 2020 (UTC)
- Images appropriately licensed.
- siege on Jaffa "to" Jaffa?
- with the
adherenceof the Banu Tayy "addition" - The Qarmatians broke and retreated back into Palestine, many being killed during their retreat for the bounty set on them by Jawhar awkward
- Fatimids went
intothe counteroffensive "onto" - Link or explain "ashraf"
- Link Berber
- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:45, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
- Hi Sturmvogel 66, all the points have been fixed. Thanks a lot for your time :) Constantine ✍ 08:25, 18 January 2020 (UTC)