Talk:Ai no Uta (Words of Love)
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Ai no Uta (Words of Love) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 28, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ai no Uta (Words of Love)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:43, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]- Looks great!
Lead
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[edit]- ""Ai no Uta (Words of Love)" (Japanese: 愛の詩 (words of love);?, "Love Poem (words of love)) is a song by Japanese recording artist Haruka Chisuga, taken from her debut studio album Try! (2016)." --> ""Ai no Uta (Words of Love)" (Japanese: 愛の詩 (words of love);?, "Love Poem (Words of Love)) is a song recorded by Japanese recording artist Haruka Chisuga, taken from her debut studio album Try! (2016)."
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[edit]- Please link "music critics" to its respective article for "Music journalism"
- "An accompanying music video was directed by Nozomi Tanaka, which featured Chisuga in a large aquarium and surrounded by bright lights." --> "An accompanying music video was directed by Nozomi Tanaka, which featured Chisuga in a large aquarium surrounded by bright lights." ?
- Please italicize Rajira Sunday and All Night
- "To promote the single, Chisuga appeared on radio stations throughout Japan including Rajira Sunday and Hiroshi Kamiya's All Night radio show, and was used as the closing theme song for the season season of Japanese anime television series, The Asterisk War." --> "To promote the single, Chisuga appeared on radio stations throughout Japan including Rajira Sunday and Hiroshi Kamiya's All Night, and was used as the closing theme song for the season season of Japanese anime television series, The Asterisk War." (Season season?) ;)
Background and release
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[edit]- Again: "On October 4, 2015, it was confirmed through Anime News Network that Chisuga was to voice over the character Sylvia Lyyneheym for the season season of Japanese anime television series, The Asterisk War.[1]" (Season season?)
- "Then in February 2016, Chisuga confirmed that a new song, titled "Ai no Uta (Words of Love)", would be served as the shows ending theme song.[2][3]" --> "Then in February 2016, Chisuga confirmed that a new song, titled "Ai no Uta (Words of Love)", would serve as the show's ending theme song.[2][3]"
Reception
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[edit]- "In a similar review, a CD Journal staff member praised Chisuga's "free" and "vigorous" vocal performance, alongside its "glossy" production. They concluded the review by calling it a "high degree of completion".[5]" --> You can't use "they" since it's technically plural while "staff member" is singular; you're gonna have to reword this
Promotion
[edit]- Please italicize Rajira Sunday and All Night
- "An accompanying music video was directed by Nozomi Tanaka." --> No source.
Personnel
[edit]- "Credits adapted from the CD liner notes of "Ai no Uta (Words of Love)";[4]" --> "Credits adapted from the CD liner notes of "Ai no Uta (Words of Love)"[4]"
Release history
[edit]- Please capitalize the first 'd' in "Digital download"
- Please remove the link from "digital download"
End of GA Review:
[edit]Keep 'em coming! Another good one with some minor changes needed before passing. On hold for seven days to allow for these changes. Thanks and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:36, 27 June 2016 (UTC).
- @Carbrera: Done and dusted! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 03:44, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
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