Talk:Agrippina the Elder/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 10:01, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 10:01, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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2.c Y

2.d Y (Highest is 0%.)
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No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y
Images appropriately licensed Y

Prose Suggestions

His untimely death in AD 19 upended those plans, however suggest However, those plans were upended by his untimely death in AD 19.

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who was seemingly on his deathbed in 23 BC, suggest who appeared to be on his deathbed in 23 BC.

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However, Marcellus died of an illness that had spread throughout the city of Rome that year. suggest However, Marcellus died that year of an illness that became an epidemic in Rome

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With Marcellus gone, suggest Now, with Marcellus dead,

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Pannonians gave up on their plans suggest Pannonians gave up and surrendered.

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Tiberius and the Ignotus is the the supposed to be here?

Yes, because "Ignotus" was not the child's actual name and the gender isn't known. Grammatically, I think it's as though someone were saying "Tiberius and the boy". I could be wrong, though.

period Caligula's reign needs an of between Caligula and reign.

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@SpartaN: That is all my comments. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:27, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You're working overtime today. SpartaN (talk) 17:31, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]