Talk:Afterburn (roller coaster)/GA1
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 21:18, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Comments
[edit]- Lead should include something from the reception section.
- "To match the original Top Gun theme..." - Has the military theme disappeared? Just asking because at Wonderland it is completely gone (other than a control tower and a fighter jet)
- I can't say for certain either way. I am attributing the theming to the original ride and, I guess, leaving it open to interpretation whether it is still there or not. Themeparkgc Talk 22:51, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
- After exiting the corkscrew, the train begins a 270-degree climbing helix to the left, after which..." - Remove one of the "after"'s...sounds weird.
- "...it reaches the ride's brake run and the return to the station" - Take out the bolded "the" and say something like, "and returns to the station".
- No reviews?
- None that I could find from reputable sources. Themeparkgc Talk 22:51, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
- "It debuted at position 18 in 1999, before disappearing from the poll for the three years to follow. The ride returned to the poll hitting a low of 45 in 2012." - Afterburn didn't appear from 2000-02 and 2009-11. The way I read it, it says that the ride disappeared in 2000 and returned in 2012.
- I've reworded it slightly. Is it less confusing now. Basically I want to summarise the table, not duplicate it in text entirely. Themeparkgc Talk 22:51, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
- Maybe mention how the ride is getting a paint job this off-season?
- Is this really important enough for inclusion? Even then a quick search only revealed discussion forums, which are not reliable sources. Themeparkgc Talk 22:51, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
- Well they did mention it on their facebook page. Either way, your choice. I just thought I would mention that because its in SheiKra.--Dom497 (talk) 20:01, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, I missed that. Done Themeparkgc Talk 23:07, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
- Well they did mention it on their facebook page. Either way, your choice. I just thought I would mention that because its in SheiKra.--Dom497 (talk) 20:01, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
- Is this really important enough for inclusion? Even then a quick search only revealed discussion forums, which are not reliable sources. Themeparkgc Talk 22:51, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
On hold for 7 days.--Dom497 (talk) 21:26, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
- @Dom497: Thanks for another review. Let me know if there is anything else. Themeparkgc Talk 22:51, 11 December 2013 (UTC)