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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:36, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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  • "was a unit of the British army" - Should British Army be capitalized?

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  • You link shillings, but not pence. Is there a specific reason for this?

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  • "Building railroads from Beirut to Haifa, tunneling, loading ammunition onto trains, guarding supplies and working as cooks." - Sentence fragment

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  • "2 MBEs, 7 Military Medals, 8 British Empire Medals" - MOS:NUMERALS

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  • Lead could use a little expansion.
Lede expanded.--Catlemur (talk) 22:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Is photography really the best way to describe the paintings of the AAPC activities? Looks like they'd be licensed public domain as a painting, too, but it seems like a description of a painting would be better than a description of a photograph.
Added "A painting of" to the description of paintings within the article. Would that suffice?--Catlemur (talk) 21:54, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Hog Farm: I removed all the paintings, perhaps I will sort the licensing some other day.--Catlemur (talk) 07:35, 27 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Good work. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 21:28, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]