Talk:Afghanistan at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 18:19, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hi Courcelles! I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:19, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Copyedit

• Here is my copyedit. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:26, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Prose & MOS

• Be consistent with linking Mohammad Durani with whatever you choose for all your articles. Right now he is linked in the infobox and the table, but not the prose.
• DSQ should use the {{Abbr}} template or have a key.
• Link 19-Norandrosterone. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:26, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Images

• No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:19, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

References

• Reference 5 should use "PARALYMPIC NEWS SERVICE" in the citation.
• Reference 6 needs the author.
• All other references look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:26, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Overall

• Overall, similar to your other articles. Looks good. Placing on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:26, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
• Thanks for another review, Gonzo_fan2007, I've fixed everything mentioned. I'm going to stop for the night and make sure we're making progress together before continuing with more of your reviews, hope that makes sense. Courcelles (talk) 00:55, 2 September 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks, everything looks good! Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:49, 2 September 2018 (UTC)