Talk:Afşin-Elbistan power stations/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Chidgk1 (talk · contribs) 08:04, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: BigChrisKenney (talk · contribs) 05:21, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, @Chidgk1: I will be reviewing this article for the January 2025 backlog elimination drive. BigChrisKenney (talk) 05:21, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Initial Assesment

Intro

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Afşin-Elbistan A

Proposed expansion

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History

"In 2004 or 2005, an EIA was done re rehabilitation and FGD."

I'm not sure what this sentence is talking about. Could you clarify it please?

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Technology

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Afşin-Elbistan B

History

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Opposition

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Cancelled power stations

Afşin-Elbistan C

I deleted duplicate information in the second paragraph that was mentioned in the first paragraph.

In the third paragraph, citation 54 needs to be updated.

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Afşin-Elbistan D and E

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Coal

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Mine

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Disease and deaths

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Economics

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Pollution

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Greenhouse gas emissions

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Opposition

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Public opinion

Good!

Sources

I checked roughly every 5th one.

80 - I could not open the link, also, it is missing information such as when it was retrieved.

6 (privacy concerns)

102 (redirect)

Several links are 404.

13, 14, 23, 46, 64, 93

Images

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I had to do a lot of editing in this article, but the content is solid. Please review my comments, in particular; Afşin-Elbistan A → History, Cancelled power stations → Afşin-Elbistan C, and source 80. Once you have reviewed my comments and made some changes, I will come back for a final assesment. BigChrisKenney (talk) 06:53, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@BigChrisKenney Great I like that you have done the edits rather than writing a lot of tiny things here like some reviewers do. Many of them I agree are improvements but there are a few I don’t think are quite right so I will try and explain in edit comments why. However feel free to press your points if my edit comments are wrong or unclear - I won’t be at all offended. Chidgk1 (talk) 16:25, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Note to self: need to read gem article to try and understand EIA conclusion myself (e.g. are they talking about a change in the emission limit? any public info re derogation? when was FGD actually installed?) then CLARIFY 2004 EIA Chidgk1 (talk) 17:44, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Have reported problem with cite 6 to website owner Chidgk1 (talk) 18:37, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Duh I should have run the cite archiving much earlier - note to self CAN I RUN SOMETHING TO FIND ALL DEAD LINKS THEN FIX THEN RUN CITE ARCHIVING