Talk:Adrift (1911 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:05, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
And time for another review.
Plot
- "An official synopsis of the film was published in The Moving Picture World says" Change says to states.
Release and reception
- "The Thanhouser advertisement in the Moving Picture News said" Link Moving Picture News here.
- "One of the last advertisements for the film would be in September 1913." Suggest rewriting to: "One of the last advertisements for the film was shown in September 1913."
- "A review in the The Moving Picture World was positive to the moral lesson" Unlink Moving Picture World as you have linked it in the production section.
- "Walton of the The Moving Picture News" Do you know Walton's first name. Also unlink Moving Picture News since it should be linked earlier in the section.
- Link The New York Dramatic Mirror.
- Any known reason why the film is lost?
References
- Link the publishers of these sources if possible.
Categories
- Add this film to the lost films category.
Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 13:40, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
- @Good888: All set - I tweaked the September 1913 in a different way - so we don't say the advertisement was shown instead of the film. I do not know of any other advertised showings past that 1913 date. Everything is all set. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:19, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
- Every issue has been addressed, so I am promoting this to GA class. good888 (talk) 09:18, 4 February 2015 (UTC)
- @Good888: All set - I tweaked the September 1913 in a different way - so we don't say the advertisement was shown instead of the film. I do not know of any other advertised showings past that 1913 date. Everything is all set. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:19, 2 February 2015 (UTC)