Talk:Adore You (Harry Styles song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 19:53, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Ashleyyoursmile, I'm going to start my review now. LOVI 33 19:53, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, Thanks! --Ashley yoursmile! 20:54, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

Only the recording studios belong in the infobox, so make sure remove Sterling Sound and Eastwest
RAK Studios → RAK, per Template:Infobox song
London, England → London, UK
Remove wikilink for Harry Styles under songwriters, WP:OVERLINK

Done --Ashley yoursmile! 07:55, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

chord progression of Cm–Eb–Ab–Bb → chord progression of Cm–E♭–A♭–B♭, using Template:Music
wikilink "Watermelon Sugar"
’70s → '70s, plus wikilink it to 1970s in music Not done since its already wikilinked in the first paragraph of Composition section
- My Bad, do not see that. LOVI 33 13:12, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done everything else. --Ashley yoursmile! 07:57, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Release and promotion

he performed the song on Capital FM's 2019 Jingle Bell Ball → he performed the song at Capital FM's 2019 Jingle Bell Ball

Done --Ashley yoursmile! 07:58, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

italicize Entertainment.ie Done--Ashley yoursmile! 07:58, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

and number eight on the Wallonia region of Belgium → and number eight in the Wallonia region of Belgium
at number 14 on the week of 22 December 2019 → at number 14 in the week of 22 December 2019
on the week of 12 January → in the week of 12 January 2020.
In its 15th week broke into the top ten at number seven → In its 15th week, it broke into the top ten at number seven
un-italicize Hot AC

Done --Ashley yoursmile! 07:59, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

Background

three Scottish locations- → three Scottish locations:
wikilink UTC to Coordinated Universal Time

Done --Ashley yoursmile! 07:59, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Synopsis

"resting fish face" → "resting fish [faces]"

Done --Ashley yoursmile! 07:59, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

No problems found, Great writing!

Credits and personnel

No problems found.

Charts

Looks Good!

Certifications

Looks Good!

Release history

Looks Good!

References

ref 8, unlink Rolling Stone Done --Ashley yoursmile! 08:00, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

On hold for now, this 100% passes all the GA requirements like I filled out above, just some technical fixes, then we can get it to GA in no time! As I said before, amazing writing, no doubt this will be GA. LOVI 33 21:51, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, Thank you very much for this review! I have addressed all comments. --Ashley yoursmile! 08:02, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ok Ashleyyoursmile, thats a pass!

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