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Feedback on article's quality from student

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Student at https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/University_of_Cincinnati/Epidemiology_of_Occupations_(Spring_2024) The lead needs to be more to the point. The first couple sentences were pretty good actually, but the rest of the body could use a facelift. Kiydal (talk) 15:39, 29 January 2024 (UTC) Kiydal (talk) 15:37, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good points. There is much to be improved. The title is not specific to its content, should be changed. TMorata (talk) 18:33, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]