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Reviewer: Hmlarson (talk · contribs) 01:37, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I have begun the review and will be posting feedback below. As issues are addressed, please add a note indicating your changes to the relevant item below. Thank you. Hmlarson (talk) 01:37, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Please modify "and is one of the merengue-influenced songs from the album" to either "is one of (many/several/a few? or actual #)" or "is a merengue-influenced song from the album"
I took the latter approach. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Despite having a title in English, " -> change to "Despite having an English title, " or something similar
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Critics praised the video's overall appeal and Shakira's appearance." Consider changing to "Many critics"
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

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  • " Despite having a title in English," change to "Despite having an English title, " or something similar
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

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  • Change "at Valencia" to "in Valencia"
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Change T-shirt to t-shirt
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Change "sports shoulder length" to "sports shoulder-length"
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The video was met with positive critical reception" --> consider changing to "Critical reception of the video was generally positive" or something similar
 Done --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Certifications

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  • Consider combining with Charts section per other GA articles about Shakira songs
I merged it since it's just one certification. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Fix link to Idolator
 Fixed --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fix Top 50 Canciones Anual 2012 reference (dead link)
 Fixed --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

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  • Should Pop/Rock be added as genre?
Actually it's neither just pop/rock. I think we should be specific in this category, hence I listed merengue. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
You can add multiple. I personally would argue that the genre is pop/rock, more specifically Latin pop with merengue and reggaeton influences/styles (similar to what is described in the lead). This is always a subjective decision/classification, IMO. No change is necessary if you do not agree. Hmlarson (talk) 17:42, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review checklist

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Excellent, well-written article. I have a few suggestions listed above; but overall, very well done.
Thank you! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  5. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Verified.
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
I have addressed the comments. Thank you for the review! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:50, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Great job! I've checked the edits - all looks good. Hmlarson (talk) 17:44, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:48, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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