Talk:Acyl-CoA oxidase deficiency

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refs need to made into refs (see WP:MEDHOW) Done
primary sources need to removed Done
needs to be checked for copyvio and that content is supported by WP:MEDRS refs
language needs to fixed per WP:MEDMOS (we don't say "patient" or "suffer") and WP:MOS (eg WP:RELTIME - nothing is "presently" or "current" in WP {[done}}

-- Jytdog (talk) 20:09, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

did first two. Jytdog (talk) 21:06, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

did MEDMOS/MOS check. now there is just the more interesting work of actually dealing with the content. Which Canada Hky has been getting started on -- thx for that. Jytdog (talk) 22:08, 25 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I am heading out of town for a week or so and will have limited access. I will continue anything that is needed when I am able to. I think the content needs to be pared down a bit more still, but very doable. Canada Hky (talk) 13:26, 26 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I think I fixed most of the outstanding content issues. Most of them were expansions on the material that was supported by the citation,but not present in the citation, so the majority of it has been removed. Canada Hky (talk) 20:06, 8 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]