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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I will finish this within two hours. JAGUAR  18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • I'd mention in the infobox image caption that the Active is in dazzle camouflage. Looked too snazzy for Royal Navy standards...
  • "The Active-class cruiser was a trio of scout cruisers" - needs plural
  • "As scout cruisers, the ships were only lightly protected to maximize their speed" - maximise
  • "thick on the slope and .5 inches (13 mm)" - is the full stop meant to be there?
  • "(the 3rd and and 1st Destroyer Flotillas (DF)" - duplication
  • No dead links
  • No dab links

Founds some minor prose errors, but once they're all done this should be good to go. JAGUAR  21:19, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

All done with these ships, but others to come if you've gotten bored!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, this is good to go now. Looking forward to it! Keep them coming in, and I'll keep reviewing them. JAGUAR  12:45, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]