Talk:Acting Sheriff/GA1

GA Review

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I've placed this article on hold

Firstly it needs a restructuring. The lead should summarise the article's main body but at the moment the lead is new info about the actual airing of the show.
Plot needs to be broken out from the lead and possible expanded.
Sources are good, but the date formats need to be consistent.
Prose is good.

YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 03:08, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Author has gone AWOL. Will resume if he comes back. YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 02:31, 17 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]