Talk:Accessible yoga/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:46, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 19:25, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Lede

What is actually in the lede is fine - but it doesn't seem to cover much. I'd want a bit more about it's origins and what it actually entails. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:25, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Extended. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:57, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It includes various forms of chair yoga - Adaptive yoga can involve yoga performed whilst sat in a seat... Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:25, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Reworded. "Chair Yoga" is a form of yoga as exercise, marketed under various brands, so we don't want to circumlocute our way around it. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:33, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

General

Yoga is linked as the first item, we don't need a main article template. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's yoga the 2000-year-old meditational practice, not yoga as exercise. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:49, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

ability.[6][1] - whilst it's not due for a GA, can we put these in numerical order? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:49, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

wrongly suggests - I think using Wikipedia voice to say this is "wrong" isn't suitable. We would need stats, a quote or something to say this view is wrong, and not make a sweeping statement Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Attributed to author, this is not Wikipedia's view. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:49, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Alice Christensen - who? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Glossed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:59, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lakshmi Voelker - who? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Glossed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:59, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There's a lot of these. I'd want a word or two explainatory comment on who they are when introduced. 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

Done; I've grouped the various Chair Yoga teachers together and introduced them just once. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:59, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The further information template is misplaced. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:59, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

We are talking about the country Wales, right? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, linked, though I'm not sure that "in Wales" could refer to anything else really. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:49, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

A 2019 systematic review - it's quite relevant to say who this was written by/for. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:34, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Attributed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:01, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:25, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 04:53, 21 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lee Vilenski: I believe I've addressed all the comments, which have been very helpful, thank you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:58, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.