Talk:Abysmal Torment

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I've done a fairly substantial copy-edit of this page for tone and punctuation. Originally the article had included a number of improper internal links to disambiguation or unrelated articles, and improper capitalization of entire words and phrases. I've fixed these minor issues, but what I was more concerned about was the tone originally used in the article. It appears to be quite a substantial copy of the biography on last.fm, as well as content originally included on wn.com. I've gone through and rephrased all of the content to avoid copyright issues, but the article still does not include any reliable sources. If anyone takes issue with the changes I've made, please discuss them here so that we may reach consensus. Thanks! --IShadowed 20:57, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Update; I've rated this article as Start class quality. This is due to the lack of references and potential original research that comprises a significant portion of the article. Should these issues be fixed, it may meet the criteria for C class. --IShadowed 21:00, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]