Talk:Abu Mayanja

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	This article was accepted on 5 February 2012 by reviewer Graeme Bartlett (talk · contribs).

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AFC Reasoning

This person should be notable, but his internet presence is approximately nill (a whole 406 unique webpages even mention him). High quality web sources are not required to have an article, but their absence makes it difficult for reviewers to gauge the accuracy of what is written here. If any such sources do exist, please add them for everyone's benefit. This submission would also benefit from being rewritten into paragraphs rather than appearing as a rambling list of things Mayanja did. Someguy1221 (talk) 11:40, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

My ideas for what they might be worth:
I would suggest you work this in chronological order. You have stuff about his childhood at the end. I would suggest a good summary of his life in 3-5 sentences at the beginning. Then a section on his childhood, a section on education, section on his political life, and then finally a section on his legacy. You might start just by taking each sentence and drop it into its proper section. Then rewrite each section. I wish I had time to help. :- ) DCS 00:30, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Google Images

An interesting thing I found out while researching, is that Google images gave a higher percentage of usable articles than a standard text search, at least on the subjects I have work on. Please, don't tell anyone else. :- ) DCS 14:54, 6 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]