Talk:Absolutely Sweet Marie/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:36, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Change Columbia Studio B to Columbia B in the infobox per the rules on the studio parameter
"of the double album Blonde on Blonde, Dylan's seventh studio album, on June 20, 1966." → "of the double album and Dylan's seventh studio album, Blonde on Blonde (1966)." or something similar since the exact release date of the album is not notable
Move the recording sentence to being the one after writing/production; follow it with the interpretation one
Move the later inclusion to being after the total number of performances in the second para, followed finally by the cover version
""Absolutely Sweet Marie" was recorded at" → "It was recorded at"
"Rolling Stone placed the track" → "Rolling Stone placed it" with the wikilink

You need to add Robbie Robertson's guitar playing to prose to warrant keeping the image

Used the Kooper image here instead, with some commentary. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:08, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after Al Kooper
"session musicians including" → "session musicians, including"
"Wayne Moss and Kenneth Buttrey," → "Wayne Moss, and Kenneth Buttrey," with the pipe
"initially on February 14." → "initially on February 14, 1966."
"during the tenth album session," → "during the 10th album session," per MOS:NUM
"which was released on June 20, 1966." → "on June 20, 1966." because included was already used
Move the last para of this section to being in comp instead since that is what it focuses on
"makes the track work."" → "makes the track work"." per MOS:QUOTE

Add the last para from the previous section at the start here; the instrumentation also should be mentioned in this section
"that line does not appear" → "the line does not appear"
"Journalist Paul Williams considered that" → "Journalist Paul Williams considers that"
[8] should solely be invoked at the end of the sentence
"and named "Absolutely Sweet Marie"" → "and names "Absolutely Sweet Marie""
"fear of being misunderstood)."" → ""fear of being misunderstood)"." per MOS:QUOTE
"from first to last."" → "from first to last"." per above
Shouldn't you use the title rather than "Dylan's song"?
"half sick/traffic" why is there a single quote mark to end this part but not one to start it?
"out of key chord."" → "out of key chord"."

Remove the img per MOS:IMAGERELEVANCE, especially when you have already used an image of another performer from this section
Pipe Kenneth Buttrey to Kenny Buttrey

Done. I've changed the source, and the credits per that source. Sanders (2020) seems to be the best available. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:00, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

On hold until all of the issues are fixed, after a quick review! --K. Peake 09:42, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks, K. Peake. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 17:18, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

BennyOnTheLoose You have not added the instrumentation from personnel to prose like I was intending you to do with the suggestion. --K. Peake 21:08, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, this is laid out well after all! --K. Peake 11:37, 29 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]