Talk:Absolutely (Story of a Girl)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 17:17, 17 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this for review. Will get to it later in the week. Most likely either tomorrow (i.e. Thursday) or Friday if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 17:17, 17 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
For this part (and Nine Days became one-hit wonders.), I think that it should be “became a one-hit wonder” as you are talking about the band, which is singular.

Background

I would link Nine Days in the first use in the body of the article.
For this part (said Hampson in a later interview.), I would clarify the year in which the interview was conducted to the prose.
I would revise this sentence (Frustrated, they continued to write before Hampson wrote “Absolutely”.) to avoid the repetition of the word “write” in such close proximity.
Please add the link for “hit single” as done in the lead.
I think that “one-hit wonders” should be singular rather than plural as it is referencing the band as a whole, not the individual band members.

Writing and composition

For this part (with Impose), I would add a short descriptive phrase to describe the publication to an unfamiliar audience.

Critical reception

Great work here.

Commercial performance

Is there any further information on the cover by Four Year Strong, such as critical reception?

Final thoughts

Great work with this article. I will pass this after my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 22:31, 17 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, thanks @Aoba47:! I fixed everything you suggested (good call on write/wrote). I couldn't find a review or any info on that cover version besides ones from non-reputable sources. Thanks again. Saginaw-hitchhiker (talk) 22:54, 17 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 23:00, 17 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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