Talk:Above and Beyoncé: Video Collection & Dance Mixes/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 18:31, 14 March 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• Remixes? I think it would read better "a remix and video" because it has several videos too
• The Allmusic review seems a bit out of place. Try wording or placing it differently

Composition and release

• Six singles -> you only list 5. Fix
• on the Billboard 200 at number thirty-six -> at number 36 on the
• lasting forty-three charting weeks -> re-word

Charts

• You should create a small numerical chart as usual. Three charts seems enough to make it.

References

• 8&9 are linked twice
• As well 11
• Most of the rest are all over-linked

• • Small article, very nice job, I'll be awaiting the fixes.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 22:49, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks, Nathan. I have done everything. Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:07, 20 March 2011 (UTC)