Talk:Above and Beyoncé: Video Collection & Dance Mixes/GA1
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Reviewer: CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 18:31, 14 March 2011 (UTC)
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[edit]- Remixes? I think it would read better "a remix and video" because it has several videos too
- The Allmusic review seems a bit out of place. Try wording or placing it differently
Composition and release
[edit]- Six singles -> you only list 5. Fix
- on the Billboard 200 at number thirty-six -> at number 36 on the
- lasting forty-three charting weeks -> re-word
Charts
[edit]- You should create a small numerical chart as usual. Three charts seems enough to make it.
References
[edit]- 8&9 are linked twice
- As well 11
- Most of the rest are all over-linked
- Small article, very nice job, I'll be awaiting the fixes.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 22:49, 19 March 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks, Nathan. I have done everything. Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:07, 20 March 2011 (UTC)
- Small article, very nice job, I'll be awaiting the fixes.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 22:49, 19 March 2011 (UTC)