Talk:About Love (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:56, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

So we meet again; will review soon --K. Peake 13:56, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Link to the lyric video in the infobox; see "Violent Crimes" as an example of how to do so
"for the soundtrack to the 2020 American film To All the Boys: P.S. I Still Love You." → "from the soundtrack to American film, To All the Boys: P.S. I Still Love You (2020)." with the appropriate target
"and the song's producers from Captain Cuts, consisting of Ben Berger, Ryan McMahon, and Ryan Rabin." → "and Captain Cuts, which consists of Ben Berger, Ryan McMahon, and Ryan Rabin; the trio also handled the song's production."
"as the soundtrack's lead single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download and streaming as the soundtrack's lead single"
"prior to its release and coincided" → "prior to its release, which coincided"
"of a North American concert tour, which was" → "of a United States concert tour that was"
"and the unpredictable nature of love." → "and the unpredictability of love."
"confesses her love" → "confesses about love"
"from music critics. It was called catchy" → "from music critics; it was called catchy"
"some labelled it as a highlight on the accompanying soundtrack." → "labelled by some as a highlight of the To All the Boys: P.S. I Still Love You soundtrack."
"in Belgium," → "in Belgium's Wallonia region,"

All Done – Carbrera (talk) 18:08, 15 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Background and release

"and releasing her fourth new studio album," → "and releasing her fourth studio album"
Target singles to Single (music)
"and included "Baby" with Clean Bandit and Luis Fonsi." → "and included the Clean Bandit and Luis Fonsi collaboration "Baby" (2018)."
"To promote the project, she embarked" → "For promotion, she embarked"
"and released the extended play" → "and released her sixth extended play"
"She also teased work on an" → "Marina also teased that she was working on an"
"when it was listed" → "where it was listed"
"The soundtrack is the first album produced" → "The soundtrack is the first album to be produced"
"franchise.[11] Also, "About Love" marked" → "franchise,[11] while "About Love" marked"
"first new song release since" → "first release of new music since"
"and the song's three producers," → "alongside its three producers"
"and Ryan Rabin, as part of" → "and Ryan Rabin; they make up the trio of"
"who produced the single" → "with them contributing production to the single"
""About Love" appears during..." the second and third sentences of the following section should be here instead as well as the img; replacing the final scene part but keeping ending credits since that is not written in the later area and I will help with the prose when I get to that section
"as the soundtrack's lead single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download and streaming as the soundtrack's lead single"
"on 7 February 2020 through Capitol Records." → "on 7 February 2020, through Capitol Records."
"Marina also announced additional" → "Marina announced additional"
"as a result of the" → "as a result of the ongoing"
"a promotional lyric video was" → "an accompanying promotional lyric video was"
Remove "that appear in the film" bit, as it is not backed up by the source
"intended for radio airplay," → "intended to receive radio airplay," with the wikilink

Composition and lyrics

"portrayed by Vietnamese-born American actress Lana Condor (shown)." → "who is portrayed by Vietnamese-born American actress Lana Condor (pictured)." on the img main text
"and a love song with" → "and a love song, with"
Where does the source mention climax?
Wikilink protagonist
"is describing her personal opinions" → "describes her personal opinions"
"love interest, Peter, played by" → "love interest Peter, who is played by"
"described "About Love" as" → "described the song as"
Second para should be merged with the first
"The key of the song is in C major" → "The song is composed in the key of C major"
"of a verse, followed by a pre-chorus, chorus," → "of a verse being followed by a pre-chorus, chorus," with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT and target
Wikilink post-chorus
"Throughout the song's" → "During the song's"
"her vocal range advances" → "Marina's vocal range advances"
Target mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
Target mastering to Mastering (audio)
Remove wikilink on Clean Bandit
"opens the song with:" → "opens the song with the lyrics:"
Where does that source mention the lyrics?

The link requires a subscription to look at the sheet music in its entirety; I added the URL subscription access template to the citation. Carbrera (talk) 04:26, 16 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

"it up for nothing"." → "it up for nothing.""
"in the chorus; she admits:" → "in the chorus, admitting:"
"hurts so much"." → "hurts so much.""

Reception

Idolator should not be italicised anywhere in this section
"in anticipation of the new single:" → "in anticipation of the single:"
"music critics gave positive reviews of the track." → "the track was met with generally positive reviews from music critics."
"claiming that:" → "stating that:"
"we’re in for a serious treat;" he also described" → "we're in for a serious treat." He also described"
Remove the introduction to Leo Sigh
"darned catchy"." → "darned catchy.""
"of the film's soundtrack;" → "of the soundtrack;"
The statements of this review are not backed up by the source

I revised the content used here. Carbrera (talk) 18:01, 15 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

"reached the official" → "appeared on the official"
"In the Wallonia region," → "In the country's Wallonia region,"

All Done – Carbrera (talk) 18:01, 15 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Track listing

Good

Credits and personnel

Wikilink Captain Cuts

All Done – Carbrera (talk) 18:02, 15 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

Charts

Good

Release history

Target streaming to Streaming media

All Done – Carbrera (talk) 18:08, 15 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

References

Copyvio score looks ok at 36.3%
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Idolator should not be italicised for refs 12 and 25
Wikilink Apple Music on ref 15
Delete the author from ref 19
'About Love' should be surrounded like shown here for refs 24 and 25

All Done – Carbrera (talk) 18:12, 15 October 2020 (UTC).[reply]

External links

Remove lyric video from here since it should be in the infobox instead like I instructed

Final comments and verdict

On hold for this short article but do not feel afraid to ping me if you have any queries! --K. Peake 10:48, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Carbrera ✓ Pass after your somewhat late response, but mention me next time because I have had a lot going on during this GAN backlog on Wiki. --K. Peake 09:43, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]