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From lilmalicoat0224: This article is very interesting. It does capture my attention from the beginning although you did not have a picture of the journalist the information is still reliable and credible. I like how you put more depth into certain areas of your article and others like his family you didn't pay too much attention to — Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.96.150.19 (talk) 18:33, 5 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Excellet opening! Really great and information into what we need to know about Rind. Everything is listed that you need to know. In the death segment I just have a few comments and questions about it. First, did they ever find who murdered him? Why was he such a target? Answer these types of questions here. In the context section I would say to just imporove on what did Rink do to promot his murder? Was he investigating something he should not have been? In the impact section just talk more about what makes Rind important. I know he was a good journalist and was murdered, but what did he do to promt a Wiki article about him? I would also suggest to go a little mor indepth in the career part. Excellet Wiki article and enjoyed reading it! Jazmine 625 (talk

This is a very well done article. You left me asking no questions about your journalist. Everything your readers need to know about this guy, how he died and why, is all solidly stated along with some more in depth information. Your article meets all the requirements stated in the rubric. The only thing i would say is put a little more information as to what he did specifically to become a target. Other than that your article is very well resourced and organized. I think you're off to a great start. Sgschmitt11 (talk) 14:40, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Very thorough! Your research and your sourcing were both strong, which gives you credibility. The details rich. Your organization was good. I would like to see your revise your lead to mention his "notability" and I would like you to tweak the writing to make it smooth. You're mingling two people who may only be connected by the fact that they were killed in the same country at about the same time, which is a kind of "recentism" in the past. Give the Wikipedia article that broad perspective that is achieved when written to be read for a long time. Internal links were strong! We're you able to find any external links? Good work! You took your subject beyond a stub status in Wikipedia Assessment, IMHO. Crtew (talk) 03:03, 12 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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