Talk:Aaron Schock/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Midnightblueowl (talk · contribs) 21:55, 1 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This has had to wait far too long for a review. I've had a fair bit of experience with political biographies here at Wikipedia, so I'll field this one. Midnightblueowl (talk) 21:55, 1 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Many sections simply consist of a list of unrelated sentences, each kept separate from one another.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	The lead section does not summarize the article's contents, as it is supposed to do according to Manual of Style guidelines.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	There are a number of non-referenced statements and claims made throughout the article.
	2c. it contains no original research.	There are a number of non-referenced statements and claims made throughout the article. They could be original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	There are too many problems here, which, coupled with the poor quality of the lede, render this a fail at this stage I'm afraid. Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:02, 1 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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