Talk:Aaron Martin (footballer, born 1989)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:58, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Merge first and second para of lead.
- "Martin began" -> He began...
- "with Conference South club" non-League.
- "He joined Coventry" re-joined...
- "with Bournemouth at" no longer A.F.C. but just AFC.
- Is there an article for loan?
- "Saints manager" not sure our readers know who "Saints" are.
- "2010–11 campaign" campaign inside pipe link. Same for subsequent "season"/"campaign" links.
- "in the FA Cup on" third round of
- "substitute" link.
- "was signed Martin then" comma after signed.
- "as the Eagles manager" not sure who those are.
- "League One side Coventry City, where" overlinked.
- "impressed Sky Blues" who?
- "transfer embargo" link?
- "at set pieces and" link.
- "in English football history" I guess this is in professional football?
- "his penalty when" link penalty kick.
- "free transfer" is there a link?
- "family home in Southampton." overlinked.
- " 6 feet 3 inches " adj=on.
- BBC Sport consistent format/link in refs.
- Ref 8 en-dash.
- Refs 13, 48, too.
- Ref 22, Southampton F.C. linked, no other publisher/works linked.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- Excellent, many thanks.EchetusXe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC)